Elevator Pitch No.2

In my last pitch, I was very energetic and felt like I had the whole conference room's attention. Although, it took too long for me to get to my pitch. I wasted too much valuable time in the beginning to where I had to rush to get to the finish line without dragging on my first elevator pitch. So, for this next pitch, I decided to tone down the energy to be more serious yet charming. I wanted people to enjoy my pitch not just my personality. I wanted to focus more on delivering the goods and specifics of my opportunity so that it would be a more well-rounded product. Nevertheless, I felt like some key parts of my first pitch were important to keep going into this next pitch such as the point system for the credit building app. I believe my next pitch below is better at explaining the product in more detail than before.

https://youtu.be/MapGzA_w-fE